Camie mentioned to me at a spontaneous chat on Book Island that she likes the latest Lola story. She's an amazing writer and been drawn to her flash fiction since we've met. Writers (at least the ones I know) seem to have quite a bit of impromtu get togethers in Second Life. I wasn't feeling that great about the "Sparkle" 100 word challenge since the story veered off in a direction I had not planned. Nevertheless, I hope you enjoy it as much as Camie or more. It's a kind of food for thought mixed with life lessons as Lola gets through another day at her fast-paced job at the hotel. I may read it this Saturday during Flash Fictin reading at Camie's shop on Book Island. Pop over if you're around at 1pm slt:)
Sparkle by RedGoddess
After coping with many personal losses in recent years, Lola no longer believes that time always heals. Although she is grateful to be among the living, she senses she's coming undone. Lola is disturbed that many missed out on living fully while alive. She hopes her funeral will not begin with "we are here to honor and celebrate the life of a beautiful young woman gone too soon." Before she could shake off these morbid thoughts, a pregnant woman is in front of her screaming, "call 911 now, I'm in labor!" She can still forge a living legacy that will sparkle.
Thank you for your words, Red, and for posting your story. I do like your 'Lola' series. This latest story has a special sparkle of hope that makes us believe that, in the end, Lola will find her happy place. :)
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So glad you're enjoying the series:) Stay tuned for more...
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